Here we have it, the first chapter (subject to change and editing) of Spurn. If you have read First World you may be surprised to see this is not from Abby's first person perspective. Don't worry we will return to Abby, this is just a brief view of Spurn to start the journey.
Chapter 1
Talina
Talina floated on her
back facing towards the half-sun. She barely noticed the expanse of sparkling
blue and green waters surrounding her. Instead, she focused on the peace and quiet
as she lay semi-submerged in the depths. Her one and only aim had been to
escape the endless squabbles of her family. And she had finally swum far
enough. She’d reached the edge of the territories, but despite the push of the drifting
currents, she wasn't quite brave enough to cross out of Earons quadrant. After
all, it was a punishable offence to enter any of the other clan areas.
The four moons were
just beginning their slow spread across the pale pink skies of Spurn. They were
the force dictating the measured ebb and fall of tides. Talina loved it when
the weak light of their half sun was washed away by the bright moonlights. Sighing,
she turned over to lightly tread water. It was probably time to stop hiding and
face her mother. Gladriel had been in fine form today. As head of the Earon
clan she took herself and her duties far too seriously.
Talina hated
confrontations, and she hated being around other Spurns; that is, with the
exception of her brother. If only she could escape forever, but there was
nowhere to swim. The four clans divided their world, each with a distinct
hierarchy and private quadrant.
Earon was the second
strongest, and with her mother as the leader she should have loved her life.
But instead, she hated it. In Earon, she was nothing but a half-breed.
She duck-dived beneath
the water. It took a few moments (far
longer than most Spurns) for her gills to kick in and the instinct to breathe
through her mouth to cease. Talina hated her differences; they drew attention,
marked her as weak. And on Spurn the weak were eaten, luckily not by each
other, but there were plenty of other predators in the waters.
Even still, she had to
admit there was truly nothing comparable to a glide through the ocean. She
didn’t even care that her webbings were small and fragile. She ducked and dived
with the currents, searching deeper until the strength of the moonlight waned.
There was a fine line in the deep water between light and eternal night. Talina
had never been able to venture any deeper, not without assistance. Her defects,
her weaknesses, prevented it.
Talina,
be back to our pontoon before half-moon. Do not make me tell you twice.
She flinched as
Gladriel’s voice echoed through her mind. Her mother was the one Spurn she was
forbidden to block out. She had the capability, but it wasn't worth the drama.
Rising once again she swam closer to the surface. The protective clear lenses
over her eyes flicked, clouding her underwater vision, before settling back
into place. Glancing to her left, a pod of droltine’s swam alongside. The
playful pink creatures with large fins and spout shaped noses were a very
distant cousin to Spurns. She danced with them in delight until they moved off
in a different direction.
Talina groaned as her
stomach rumbled; she hadn't eaten today, refusing this mornings’ ration of
Cucreamer. Normally she loved the sweet, pink fruit, but for some reason earlier
she’d been unable to stomach any food. But with all of the distance she had
travelled, her energy had depleted significantly. Through her lenses she
noticed a small stock of Krillonia, the
shrimplike planktonic crustacean that was her favorite. Gliding in the midst of
the dense cloud it was simple enough to open her mouth, expelling the water
through the small gills on her neck and take in the sustenance.
Satisfied for the moment, she increased speed towards her
home pontoons. A flash in her peripheral brought a broad smile across her face.
A familiar vision darted out of the gulf-stream to fall in beside her.
Raror, where did you come from?
She opened her mind to speak with her brother. He was the
only one to never judge her, and she loved him dearly. His emerald colored hair,
long enough to secure him as a future leader, streamed behind in the ocean
depths. The visible veins beneath his skin were more prominent than ever; he
had to have been swimming long and hard to get that amount of pump.
Earon has
been called to Silver City for a meeting of council heads. Mother sent me.
The deep rich timbre of his voice echoed through her mind. Without
fail it evoked memories of the many nights he had protected her, rocked her to
sleep and comforted away her hurts throughout the years. His voice was the
sound of safety. Talina had only been to the underwater city once. It was
difficult for her to make that distance, the water pressure at that depth
played havoc on her senses. But Raror was often there. It was the neutral
ground where the four clans discussed all issues.
What
has happened to bring everyone together?
She knew this was rare.
He didn't answer immediately;
they’d just reached the edge of Earon’s pontoons, and needed to slow.
Some
strange occurrences. Three Baroons and a Gerk have gone missing, and there have
been disturbances on the Sacred Isle.
The last part was said
with disdain and fear. For a world that was predominantly water the one section
of land was protected and off-limits to everyone except the Keepers.
Some
of the cucreamer and wood have been reported missing. The rationing systems are
thrown out, so we’ve had to redistribute. The vote found the Gerks receiving
less.
Panic threaded through
Talina’s mind. Who would risk the wrath of the gods to steal from the Sacred Isle?
She pushed that disturbing and terrifying thought aside for the moment to focus
on the caste system of the clans, something which she despised.
Why
is it always the Gerks who are treated like lesser Spurns? They are no
different. Hair color should not dictate status for life.
Raror internally sighed,
sympathizing but not completely understanding the pain from his soft-hearted
sister. Her own treatment from the majority of other Spurns had resulted in her
possessing an unparalleled empathy. But the caste groups were a part of life on
Spurn. The Gerks, or Greys were mostly found in positions of servitude,
controlling less territory, power and status. It had always been that way.
They dodged the
pontoon pets, cat and dogfish swimming lazily in the waters surrounding their
family home. Talina gave a quick pat to Toto, her favorite little friend,
whilst keeping an eye out for Earons guardian Chamandia. The large water dragon
had never liked her, and since just one touch of its scales or breath of its
venom would find you writhing in agonizing pain for days, it was worth the vigilance.
In sync, brother and
sister surfaced. Talina sucked in a deep breath. This was the fastest way to
initiate the respiratory valve switch inside, back to using lungs. Unlike other
Spurns, for her this was a much more comfortable state. She stared with dismay
towards their floating pontoon. As Gladriel was head of Earon, their home was the
most lavish. Composed of the trees off the Sacred Isle, the timber slats were
layered over each other, with small decks off each level.
The clans were granted
a certain quota of the Lagoona trees. The leaders then divided this between the
individual families. So it was no surprise that Gladriel’s was three stories of
floating opulence. Talina’s room was at the top, lowest family members were the
farthest from the water. Behind were low rows of tethered pontoons, spreading
as far as the eye could see. The emerald flags of Earon swayed lazily in the
cooling breezes. This was the majority of their community, with just a few lone
Spurns scattered throughout the quadrant.
Raror was already at
the edge. Talina watched as his lithe muscles rippled, and he shot himself up
out of the water and onto the higher decking, a feat her weaker body had no
chance of achieving. He lowered the ladder for her to climb. With a sigh Talina
grabbed the bottom rung and started moving upwards. The fine webbings between
her fingers disappeared, and each digit emerged. She was the only Spurn whose
webbing completely disappeared when out of the water. Her long emerald hair
trailed behind, but unlike the pure color of the other Earons, Talina’s had
many flecks of black throughout.
According to Gladriel,
this was courtesy of her unknown father, who was not of Spurn. They’d had a
brief affair before he disappeared, never to be seen again. Spurns rarely stayed
in long-term relationships; they tend to have mating seasons, and then move on.
Off-spring are raised by the collective, though they stay close to their
mothers for housing purposes, moving on when they have their own children.
Raror reached down,
and hooked Talina under the arms, dragging her onto the middle decking - his
level.
“Gladriel
has requested us downstairs Talli.” Raror spoke aloud, his lispy voice courtesy
of the Spurnians tongue structure and vocal cords, something she also lacked.
“I just need one day without her constant
disapproval.” Talina groaned and hung her head. Her voice was so quiet Raror
struggled to hear her words. He pulled her into a tight hug; she shivered
slightly against his skin, always so much colder than her own. Spurns were not
a demonstrative people, but Raror made the exception for his gentle sister.
“Come,
we might as well find out what she wants. Get it over with.” He took her hand
and led her downstairs. Talina kept her head lowered, not making eye contact
with any of the Earons scattered throughout her mother’s vast quarters.
“Nice
to see you Raror, my son.” Gladriel, shifted in her bright pink coralline
chair. It was a living entity made by microscopic sea creatures that continued
to grow even outside of the ocean. Gladriel lifted her emerald hair over one
shoulder; it was free flowing down to her knees, as any good ruler’s would be.
Then Gladriel turned her cold yellow eyes towards Talina.
“And you. Take a seat,
and do not speak unless I require you to.” Eyes downcast, Talina scurried along
before falling down to sit crossed legged on the floor. She was in the back
corner, where no one could come at her from any side but the front. Raror took
his appointed seat next to Gladriel in a smaller coralline chair. The rest of
the floor space was taken up by the heads of the minor family units within
Earon.
“Thank
you all for gathering so quickly. My son has returned from the city with grave
news of threats to the sacred Isle.” A gasp sounded throughout the room. They
all understood the gravity of the situation. Spurns could not survive without
that small stretch of land. “However, in the time since the meeting at Silver
city, there has been a capture on the Isle.”
Gladriel’s slightly
pointed teeth gleamed as she smiled around the room. She looked proud, as if
she had made the arrest herself. “Foreigners, from a distant planet apparently.
And the chosen of the clans are to convene for the trial.”
Whispers
and murmurs echoed throughout. The last foreigner from another planet was
Talina’s father. Talina sighed; she knew what this announcement meant for her. Raror
would be gone, and life was almost unbearable without the protection of her
brother. Nothing that she couldn’t handle of course, but the constant taunts
and loneliness would wear her down after awhile. Plus Gladriel loved to leave
her with all the worst jobs, in particular she hated having to de-barnacle the
base of their pontoon.
As if Raror had heard her
thoughts, he raised his head to glance in her direction. A small smile played
on his lips. She wondered what he was up to.
“Mother,
I cannot attend this with you.” He spoke without hesitation. The rest of the
gathered members looked up at him in confusion. More and more lately he had
been taking the responsibilities of the clan. Talina waited for her mother to
explode, but instead Gladriel simply smiled out into the expanse of the room.
“Talina
will accompany us Raror; you do not need to worry of your promise to her.”
He swung around to
stare at the troubling smirk displayed by the head of Earon. Talina could tell
by his expression he felt the same way she did; Gladriel was up to something.
And right now she was not keen to be going on this adventure. But as always,
she had no choice.
The next morning
Talina and Raror hung their legs off the side of her top level balcony. Eighteen
pontoons had been separated from the collective to head for the Isle. It would
take them seven days powered by wind and sea-horses to reach the land. Earons
quadrant was the second largest behind the Baroons; blue hairs were top of the
food chain here.
“You
know despite the fact Gladriel is probably going to have me sacrificed. I am
really excited to see the Isle.” Talina rested her face on the railing, staring
out into the half-sun lighting a pink sky.
Raror glanced side-ways
at his sister. He’d always thought she looked like a mystical creature. The differences that marked her as weak among
Spurns seemed beautiful to him. The thin lines of hair covering the ridges
above her eyes and the flicked out strands along her eye-lids framed her brown
eyes perfectly. Most Spurns had eyes that ranged from gold to marmalade, but
always in the yellow variety. So Talina’s looked especially unique.
The black flecks
through her hair, which she was so clever at hiding, transformed her emerald to
that of the brightest polished stone. She was taller than almost everyone on
Spurn. Only the Baroon’s leader topped her height, though she was leaner and
less muscular. But more than all of this it was the innate goodness that shined
from her; she was not like the rest of them, operating in the animalistic
environment of eat or be eaten. She had imparted much of her gentle qualities
onto Raror, and he believed himself to be a better Spurn for it.
“Don’t
you worry little sister.” He patted her warm arm. “I will never let mother hurt
you.” He had made a promise – to protect her from all of those that aimed to
harm. And on Spurn, that was everyone.
Talina really enjoyed
the journey, she didn’t see Gladriel once, and there was nothing more calming
then the great expanses of the ocean. They were due to make land the next
morning, and she wondered if she would get any respite tonight. This was the
most exciting thing to occur in her nineteen year life-time. She’d never seen
land that formed above the water. It was later than she’d thought, noticing the
moons were already at full sky. She left her balcony.
Generally, Spurns
require exactly five hours of closed eye respite, whether above or below the
water. Talina functioned better on six or more. She opened her pod; it was half
full of water, a calming level for her. Shedding her white mesh covering she
stepped in. Lying back and closing her eyes, she allowed the pontoon’s rhythmic
movement and water in her pod to calm her energized thoughts. Surprisingly she
had no trouble drifting off.
The
next morning the Earons gathered together.
“Isn’t it the most
beautiful thing you have ever seen?” Talina held Raror’s arm as she bounced in
excitement, a euphoric emotion that she rarely felt. They were
standing on the balcony, waiting for Gladriel’s command to start swimming.
“It’s
so strange, as if something has broken the ocean and there is a crack in it.” Raror
was wide-eyed, the clear lenses flickering off and on as his eyes adjusted to
the air. The sand was white, with just a tinge of gold. It was unlike any color
Talina had seen on Spurn before. The sunlight sparkled off the grains like the
precious jewels they were.
Earons,
take to the water now. We are to make our way to the edge of the Isle and wait.
Their leader’s voice echoed
through her mind, and without hesitation Talina dived into the depths. She let
the water flow over her, and as her gills kicked in she took off. Speed swimming
was one of her absolute favorite things to do. To her left Raror was keeping
pace, although if needed he could almost double her velocity through the water.
Emerald hair streamed in
the currents, as their collection of members approached the golden sands of the
Sacred Isle. For the first time in her life Talina was shocked to see the
tapering up of the ocean floor. It became shallower until at last she could put
her feet down and stand above the water line. She wobbled precariously, but as
her lungs kicked in, she found her feet on the squishy sand, digging her toes
in for extra stability. Gladriel, who’d been the first to stand, shifted once
or twice, but managed to stay straight at the head of their group.
“Do
not move too quickly. It will take time to get used to the stillness of land.”
Her lisped words echoed around. Judging by the tumbles already being taken in
the shallow water, she was very correct.
Talina turned at the
sound of another pontoon. The blue flags indicated that the Baroon’s had
arrived. They were currently tethering to a nearby station. Her heart skipped a
few beats at the possibility of seeing Ladre, their intimidating leader. She
swung back around as Gladriel spoke again.
“We have permission to
move onto the land. Take it slowly. Maybe start on all fours for balance.”
Gladriel waved everyone forward, before turning away to concentrate on her own journey.
Their leader was still slightly off-kilter but otherwise made it onto the flat
sand without drama. Realizing she was getting left behind, Talina took her
first hesitant step.
Her muscles made their
usual adjustment for the sway and ebb of the ocean, but for the first time there
was no movement from below. So, of course, she over-balanced and sprawled
headfirst into the shallow water. Raror moved to help her up, but he was just
as un-coordinated, splashing next to her. Dragging herself forward, on hands
and knees, Talina landed on the still dryness of land. Her head started to
sway, and an instant nausea rose as her body tried to compensate for the lack
of movement it was so used to.
“I think I’m going to
be sick.” Raror dived past her to heave his morning cucreamer all over the
sand. And he wasn’t the only one. Talina flipped over to her back and using the
half-sun as an anchor breathed deeply for a few moments. Finally the nausea
abated, well enough, so she wasn’t about to join the hurling ranks. Sitting up,
she straightened her shaky legs before pulling herself to stand.
She guessed that this
was how it felt when learning to walk for the first time. Balancing without the
movement of the ocean required different muscles and a centre of gravity that
Spurns lacked, but eventually, most of the Earon clan was able to stand and
move further along the sandy beach. Talina loved the delicious texture between
her toes; it tickled as it scrubbed her feet. Once walking became easier, she
was able to observe her environment. And she wasn’t the only one; most of the
Earon clan was trying to walk and take in the vast wonders surrounding them. So
of course there were plenty of tumbles, golden grains flying up in small clouds
all around her.
The sand started at
the water line and drifted gently up a curved mound. From there on it looked to
Talina like a mix of sand and wafts of green vegetation. She knew that the
entire island was only fifty miles wide and ten miles long. At least eighty
percent consisted of the Lagoona Tree plantations, which she could see stretch out
across the distance in long straight rows.
It was simply
incredible to see. Everything looked so free and unencumbered with no water
surrounding it. She was distracted at just that moment as Raror fell down next
to her, and a grin spread across her face as she reached out a hand to help him
up.
“This is not exactly
how I pictured this experience.” He shook his head, dispelling the masses of
sand that had accumulated in his long straight hair. It was such a warm day
that already sections of the emerald looked dry.
“We need to get you to
water soon, Raror.”
Talina examined him in
worry; she had never forgotten that story of the Baroon, the blue haired Spurn
who’d gotten lost on this island. They had found him almost at the water edge.
His hair, which looked to be reaching for the water, had lost all color and was
brown and shriveled. From that day they’d been warned to never let their hair
completely dry. It was a living entity that was physically part of every one of
them. If you cut a Spurn’s hair, you might as well cut off their arm. But
Talina knew that in this case she was also different. She’d been curious when
she was younger and allowed her hair to dry completely – having water ready
just in case – but she only experienced mild discomfort and a dry mouth.
“I’m sure they will
have water available when we reach the buildings.” Raror attempted to placate
his fretting sister.
It felt like forever,
but eventually Talina noticed a small building with a court-yard in the
distance. It had been a slow progression and the members of all four clans were
staggered along the beach. Already standing under the eaves of the building were
the Yetles with their sunlight yellow hair. Behind their people were the
Baroon’s. They marched in a coordinated line. None of them had land-sickness,
and their dark blue hair was sand free. And at the very back, farthest from the
meeting were the Gerks, the smallest group, their hair shorter and steel-grey.
Finally, the Earon
clan finished their complete trek across the warm sand, to halt in the shade of
the large building. Raror sighed in relief as a cool spray rained down on their
group. The entire perimeter of the building had shooting jets delivering a
constant stream of the briny ocean water. Talina strained to see where this
water came from, finally she noticed a few Gerks off to the side pumping a
large handle. It was attached to some type of water well.
“Talina
... Raror, it is nice to see you again.”
Talina
spun around at the sound of a familiar voice. Ladre was the first of the Baroon’s
to arrive. He was her secret fantasy, so much more than the average Spurn – taller
than her by at least two inches, the darkest blue hair, and a skin tone that
was pinker than most others. She had admired him from afar, since ... well it
felt like forever. And the most important part, he was always kind to her, even
going out of his way to offer her jobs in Silver city, preventing his clan from
treating her as less and always stopping for a chat. Despite the fact he was
considered the most powerful Spurn alive, he was honorable, and she wished that
there wasn’t such an unbridgeable gap between them.
As he met her stare, a
familiar heat flooded her cheeks. Among Spurns, this only happened to her and
only when she was around Ladre. Raror had discretely asked others, and not one
Spurn had ever experienced this warm face sensation. Talina always wondered if
they were too cold blooded.
“Ladre,
it is good to see that your clan arrived from Silver city.” Raror lowered his
head slightly, showing the Baroon leader the respect due to his position. Not
that Talina had ever seen Ladre impose his position on others, unlike Gladriel.
My son and I have to step inside for
the initial meet-up. Everyone else stay on the beach.
As if she’d heard Talina’s thought, the harsh order sounded from her mother.
Raror touched her arm
briefly before stepping under the overhanging eaves to enter through the open
doorway. Ladre, who would definitely be expected inside hesitated before
leaning closer to Talina.
“Are
you not joining us for the meeting? The clan leaders have been called.” His
hairless face, and dark yellow, almost ochre eyes looked confused. Normally
daughters of leaders would be included in all important clan decisions.
She
shook her head. “Gladriel likes to keep her mistakes as far away from her as
possible.” Her deep brown eyes widened in shock and she covered her mouth with
both hands. What was she thinking saying something so honest? She just got
flustered around Ladre, and when her mind was muddled she said stupid things.
Understanding replaced his confusion and with a genial nod, he left her there,
leading his members into the building. It took a few moments for Talina’s
cheeks to cool again.
The remaining Spurns stayed
in their clan groups, sitting under the spray. A few made their way back to the
ocean, finding it uncomfortable to stay on land. But there was no mingling
between the hair colors, and Talina hated that more than anything. Frustrated
and bored she moved away from the collective to explore their surroundings. The
longer she was on the land, the more it felt right. She loved the vast expanses
of ocean, the quiet, the freedom. But there was that other side that apparently
craved the stillness of land.
She
made her way through a small section of Lagoona trees. She knew that she
shouldn’t wander off. The woods were patrolled by Baroon Keepers, and their job
was to make sure nothing was disturbed. Each stick of tree was precious, and
all allocations viewed and voted on. It was a versatile material, with both
thin and thick stems that were quite pliant and springy, yet never deteriorated
in the salt water. The older plantation had stems that extended high in the
sky, with just a few scattered leaves up top. The leaves were pretty useless
and were mainly utilized as stuffing for day beds.
While wandering
aimlessly she accidentally stumbled through a bush into a clearing. Before her
was a small building. Curious as to what this secreted area was, she crept
closer. She noticed two armed Baroons at the entrance door. Is
this where they were keeping the prisoners?
There was a small window, high up
on the back wall. Most Spurns would have no chance of reaching it, but with a
little help, Talina might have a shot. Curiosity drove her forward, and she
managed to find a rock that wasn’t too large. She dragged it beneath the window.
These actions were definitely outside her normal behavior. She didn’t go
looking for trouble; she’d already spent far too many moons being disciplined.
But something urged her forward.
She
stood on the rock using the wall to balance herself. She still had to stand on
her tiptoes to be able to see in through the barred window. It was definitely a
prison, and two of the four small rooms were occupied by a collection of
strange humanoids. They had the same basic shape as Spurns, but ... with no
webbing or gills ... and their skin was the wrong color. Her eyes were drawn
to one of the females in particular. A stunning red-head, she was statuesque
and much taller than Talina. She stared in amazement at the pale ivory of this
females’ skin and the cat-like green eyes. Talina couldn’t believe what she was
seeing ... green eyes ... crazy.
But the reason this
female, in particular, stood out from her own group, were amazing red markings
that framed the left side of her face and moved down her neck. She strode
around the prison, so sure ... confident. This was a woman who was afraid of no
one. Talina was instantly jealous; she’d always wished for one ounce of the composure
and attitude this female effortlessly displayed. But that would never happen.
Talina
could see that the prisoners had hair on their faces, just like her own. Twin
lines about their eyes and flicked out blackness along their eye lids. Were
they from the same land as her father? Excitement and panic flooded her. She
needed to break in there and speak with them before they either disappeared or went
to trial. The red-haired female turned to yell at someone in the opposite cell. Talina’s
shifted her view to observe him, a giant man with broad planes and flashing
dark eyes. He was unlike any of the males on Spurn, but Talina found his chiseled
jaw and muscular physique attractive, for some reason. She had just started to
observe the rest of the inhabitants when strong hands grabbed her, pulling her
backwards off the window.
The Walker Clans are as follows:
ReplyDeleteAbernath – (black tribal) – Princeps: Que
Doreen – (red lace) – Princeps: Josian
Relli – (gray swirls) – Princeps: Grantham
Kaos – (brown stripes) – Princeps: Krahn
Gai – (white dots) – Princeps: Jedi
Laos – (golden yellow sunbeam) – Princeps: Tatiana
Whar – (indigo/ purple square patterned) – Princeps: Nos
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